GA Review
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Nominator: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 12:31, 29 October 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Riley1012 (talk · contribs) 21:43, 25 January 2025 (UTC)
Hello, I will complete an initial review within the next few days. -Riley1012 (talk) 21:43, 25 January 2025 (UTC)
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1. Well-written
No notes on the prose, good job.
- Add "and coach" to the end of the first sentence.
2. Verifiable
Passes Earwig's. Spot check- 5, 6, 10, 12, 14, 17, 20, 24, 30, 33, 41, and 46 are all fine.
- Could you add |via=[[Newspapers.com]] to the references retrieved from Newspapers.com?
- Are the LinkedIn citations necessary given both times it's used there is an independent source along with it?
- Nice catch. Removed. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 01:26, 31 January 2025 (UTC)
3. Broad
- I'm assuming there's nothing else to add since being released from NC Central?
- No new developmemts yet. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 01:26, 31 January 2025 (UTC)
4. Neutral
The article is neutral.
5. Stable
The article is stable day-to-day.
6. Illustrated
No images to evaluate, unfortunately.
@WikiOriginal-9: Okay, that's it. This is a well-written article. Let me know when you've gone through the review. -Riley1012 (talk) 01:02, 31 January 2025 (UTC)
- @Riley1012: Addressed everything. Thanks for the review. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 01:26, 31 January 2025 (UTC)
- Thanks for the quick response, everything looks good to go now! -Riley1012 (talk) 01:37, 31 January 2025 (UTC)