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Louise Beach
- ... that Louise Beach co-arranged O Shenandoah! And Other Songs from the New World, a viola education book aimed at children?
Moved to mainspace by Miraclepine (talk).
Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 53 past nominations.
paul2520 💬 21:06, 29 January 2025 (UTC).
- Looks like this nomination skirted in just in time, so good job getting it done. Please complete your QPQ ASAP. Looking at the article broadly, length is good, sourcing seems adequate, and no images makes that part easy. I think the hook isn't terribly good, though. Consider jazzing it up by yanking the book title and noting the that her varied career has included composing at the highest level and children's book writing. ~ Pbritti (talk) 22:02, 29 January 2025 (UTC)
- Thanks for the feedback, Pbritti. Just completed my QPQ review.
- How's this for an alternate hook?
- ALT1: ...that the music career of Louise Beach has ranged from nationally-recognized composition to a children's book about the viola?
- Let me know! = paul2520 💬 16:26, 30 January 2025 (UTC)
