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Your submission at Articles for creation: Careers Through Culinary Arts Program (C-CAP) (December 15)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Ca was:

This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject.

The comment the reviewer left was:

Especially, remove the "Notable Alumni" section, which has no sources and is filled with buzzwords. Many promotional claims are not even sourced. It will likely be accepted once fixed.

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Ca ^{talk to me!} 10:32, 15 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, KDuryea! Having an article draft declined at Articles for Creation can be disappointing. If you are wondering why your article submission was declined, please post a question at the Articles for creation help desk. If you have any other questions about your editing experience, we'd love to help you at the Teahouse, a friendly space on Wikipedia where experienced editors lend a hand to help new editors like yourself! See you there! Ca ^{talk to me!} 10:32, 15 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Ways to improve Tanya Steel

Hello, KDuryea,

Thank you for creating Tanya Steel.

I have tagged the page as having some issues to fix, as a part of our page curation process and note that:

Some of the sources are promotional. This article has the hallmarks of a commissioned work to promote the subject.

The tags can be removed by you or another editor once the issues they mention are addressed. If you have questions, leave a comment here and begin it with {{Re|Kudpung}}. Remember to sign your reply with ~~~~. For broader editing help, please visit the Teahouse.

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Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 23:48, 24 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

@Kudpung:Thank you so much! I really appreciate the feedback. I tried to link to sources that prove accuracy so I will review them and remove any that look too promotional.~~~~ KDuryea (talk) 04:18, 25 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]

Please understand that any or all of the unreferenced claims can be deleted by another editor. In some cases, the article may be deleted. Sources that establish notability must also be high quality, preferably to in-depth treatments in establish national press newspapers of record. Staff listings and fleeting mentions are not admissible. Please also fully disclose your COI according to WP:PCD all dsections.Kudpung กุดผึ้ง (talk) 04:36, 25 January 2025 (UTC)[reply]